Twitter Competition
To mark the launch of our ‘Where stories happen’ up to 20%* off summer promotion we would like to ask YOU to create your very own Twitter short story (and the chance to win a great prize)! We have started the story off for you by providing the first line and now it’s up to you! A line a day will be chosen from all your suggestions by @BestWesternGB to create the next part of the plot!
To add your daily suggestion for the next line of the story, just begin your tweet with:
‘your suggestion for the next part of the story @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller’.
Here is the story so far:
Starting line: It was a sunny Monday morning the day before the longest day of the year and things were just starting to get @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 1: busy ahead of the re-opening of the pier. Nobody noticed the silhouette of a ship on the horizon @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 2: which seemed to limp towards land. As the ship got closer those on the pier were shocked by the scene on board @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 3: the sails were torn, the bow battered and nothing on board but a colony of ….. @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 4: …dogs. They were shivering in a huddle in the middle of the deck, surrounded by… @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 5: debris and detritus from the bottom of the sea. All at once they started @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 6: barking frantically. Those watching realised that the ship was on a collision course with the pier. Everyone @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 7: watched in shocked silence, rooted to the spot for what seemed like minutes, until a teenage boy yelled …… @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 8: in pain. He clasped his hands over his ears to block out the excruciating…@BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 9: high pitched shrieking. The noise got louder & louder in the boys ears, but only he seemed affected. Suddenly…@BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 10: there was silence. Total silence. Even the seagulls on the cliff were quiet. The ship @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 11: stopped moving and the boy fell to his knees. There was….. @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 12: no hope left for anyone now. The whole town knew that @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Day 13: the mission had been unsuccessful. The only thing they could do now was … @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Last line: ..hope that the centuries-old curse put on the town by the canine god Anubis had now been lifted. @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
Story time will run from Monday 20th June until Monday 4th July when we will (hopefully) have a complete short story!
The completed Twitter short story will be printed in the next edition of our Do Not Disturb In-hotel Magazine and one lucky story teller will be picked at random from all entries over the 2 week period to win a 2 night dinner, bed and breakfast break in a Best Western hotel.
If you can’t wait to see if you have won our free break and need to get away from it all now, take a look at the great rates on offer in our summer promotion.
If you want some inspiration check out our ebook!


18 Comments
The ship was full of people who had strange faces, who are these people?
janet clegg
which could have just come out of the film Pirates of the Carribean. To everyones amazement
Patricia White
love to win
Lesley Procter
Guardian Angels, they called out loudly to the shore, please take them to safety, they are the last of there kind
junecoates
Growling and barking moving round in circles not sure what was happening @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
@chris_woodgate
“evacuate the Pier. Armed men on board ship, take cover” his voice trembling with terror @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller’
caroline mccabe
sound of metal on metal as the boat strikes the Pier supports @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller’
caroline mccabe
he collapsed to the floor as the boat struck the Pier. All hell let loose as the dogs made their escape into the icy waters along with a few swarthy young men @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
caroline
A huge crash followed and the dogs made their escape into the icy water along with two swarthy young men @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
caroline
He collapsed to the floor as the boat struck the Pier. All hell broke loose @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
caroline
had come to a stand still at last. The dogs racing from the ship to the pier seemed to be following the scent or the noise of
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collided with the Pier and all hell broke loose. The dogs made their escape plunging into the icy water @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
caroline
collided with the Pier and all hell broke loose. Hundreds of dogs plunged into the icy water @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
caroline
Stunned silence as the ship destroyed the pier as a woman knelt down to attend the boy. Then suddenly
@chris_woodgate
This was It , the day the whole town had live in fear of the day that……….
julia oldham
wait until the clock struck midnight. They would then see whether it was man or wolf. They could only somehow..
Steve Chay
wait until the clock struck midnight. They would then see whether it was man or wolf. They could only somehow.. @BestWesternGB #BWBestSeller
stevechay
When is the winner being picked at random? Thanks
Sue Crisp